Thread:AttackonTaco/@comment-29542250-20170131220032/@comment-27657208-20170131234032

hmmm... honestly i dont think you should use the raiju again since youve already used it for a character of yours. repeating it just becomes lazy and tacky and same thing goes with lightning powers. i get that its your favorite element and all but youre kinda beating a dead horse at this point. if you keep using the same theme or powers across all your characters then youre just not innovating or growing. and i feel like randomly pairing something arthurian like avalon with something japanese like raiju just doesnt fit well to me. like what reason are you picking those two words? it feels like theyre only together because you want two cool things to be together for the sake of having two cool sounding things together

as for the princess thing... ive seen a lot of bad ocs with the cliche rebellious princess syndrome. it doesnt have to apply to a princess, just anyone who hates their well off life and changes their identity in a new place to see how others would treat them. its like the plot of so many cheesy romance movies. its been done too many times before. its boring, cheesy, tacky and unoriginal.

branch out, try something different, something new. dont just stick to the same tropes that you like because youll never get anywhere like that.